Ahem! Video Feedback

WWW: a nice variety of footage
: footage represents the artist and the genre
: appeals to target audience

EBI: quicker editing to match the soundtrack
: add in some effects
: sync up the singing

What i will do:
in order for me to improve my video and meet the demands of Ahem! i will cut to the beat with the clips to make sure there in time with the soundtrack. I will also add in effects on clips aswell as text to make it look more professional as well as re-syncing all the clips.